Book week 2019

i dressed in Christmas tree on book week and my Christmas tree and any book that has Christmas

tree i'm finding cool my favorite part so far was when our room was upstairs in front of the whole school and my favorite book is called The Diary of a Wimpy kid.

World Cloud of Kate Sheppard

his is my World Cloud of Kate Sheppard.

Hey you here is my sick sentences: 

The woman pulled the world along a road. There was a city ahead. The sky was cloudy.

The woman pulled that place behind her back. She had a city on her side.The sky was white as snow and seemed to be farther than ever.

Kate Sheppard Genial.ly

Here is my Kate Sheppard Genial.ly I really I enjoyed doing it and it was fun learning more about her.

Show not tell

tell

Laila was shocked

show

she trembled as if seeing a ghost
their eyes were bulging
the heart was pounding for hours
her  face was white as a vampire's

tell

Brianna was excited to see her best friend 

show 

she jumped up and down

her eyes shone like stars from the sky

she shouted when she saw her best friend

tell

Aurora felt sad

show

 tears rolled down her face like a river in high tide

 she kept her head down

 she kept saying she was dumb

 her nose turned red as well as his face

tell 

Sarah was in love 

show

your thinking was far away

and praised everything and everyone

kept looking at your beloved all the time

and in everything wrote his name

spying on him

and could neither speak nor look at him

and shivered when she was near him or he walked by

Sick Sentences

Hey bloggers

these are sick sentences and i'm trying to improve them 

The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.

now to improve

The man ran up the slope.He used big poles.The sun was hot.The sky was a bit gray.He looked up to the view from the top. 

Edmund Hillary TImeline